TELL ME IF THIS IS A GOOD STARTING!?!?

You know what ? It's a gr8 premise but you seem to have revealed everything all at once. i think you should go about it slowly so that the readers have something to look forward to. You're revealing the plot all in the first page. If it has something to do with the father then at first you should try to show the normality of the protagonists life- however normal a super being can be, that is. You also seem to be jumping from one subject to another- the execution should be smooth not jerky- the readers get confused otherwise. Last thing, you don't need to describe every little action -like in the first para you say the protagonist presses the talk on and puts the speaker to her ears. u don't need to say that- the readers know what happens when the phone rings and you answer. I hope u don't mind me saying all this- it's said in a positive spirit. Your plot is facinating and you should keep on developing it.